You're Making It Too Easy on Your Protagonist
Action doesn't always indicate challenge.
One of the most common problems I see in the manuscripts I edit is that the hero gets what he wants a little too easily. (Sometimes, a lot too easily.)
You might think, wait, what? Not me. I have all these bad guys, gunfights, and explosions.
Doesn’t matter. I’ve seen plenty of action scenes ruined by heroes succeeding too often.
Today, I want to share a chapter from my upcoming book, Self-Editing for Comic Book Writers.
I chose this chapter to share because the problem it addresses is very common, and it undermines so many otherwise great stories.
Plus, it’ll help comic writers and novelists.
Click here to download the chapter.
My Kickstarter campaign for the book goes live on Tuesday, July 28. I will be offering discounted tiers for the first 24 hours of the campaign.
For my glorious Substack subscribers, I will have a secret add-on item. To show my appreciation for my weekly readers, I will hold a special Q&A session on Saturday, November 14 at noon EST.
Kickstarter doesn't allow free add-ons, so I priced this at the $1 minimum. This is my way of saying thank you to my Substack subscribers.
Read the book, then join me for a live Q&A where we'll talk writing, editing, storytelling, and anything else you'd like to ask.
Click here to follow the campaign.
I’ll send the secret add-on link after the campaign is live.




Guilty, and I’m actually correcting it in some fun ways.